August 2, 2012
Dear Dr. Brunswick,
I’m
writing you this letter because as principal of our school I believe you have
the power to implement change within our district and ultimately influence your
fellow principals and district policy makers to make some positive changes. I
know that you are very aware of the transition the education system has
undergone from simply educating the students for knowledge sake to “teaching to
the test”. This shift hasn’t occurred over night, it’s gradually made its way
to down this broad wide path. I see where we are and I have a few ideas that I
believe will help us get back on track.
Opinions
are like noses, everyone has one. While everyone can say what they think the
teachers should be doing to help students benefit from their schooling
experience, I think my opinion as a teacher is very valuable in this category.
One of the major criticisms I have about being geared to teach to the test is
FEAR! Teachers lack the confidence to step outside of the box because there are
so many threatening factors forcing us back in. Standardized tests are used to
compare our students to one another and students across the country, but they
are also used to compare us to one another. When our students take a test,
generally the “best” teachers have been judged by their student’s progress. If
any students fail, that means the teacher failed at teaching them. So teachers
are afraid to leave any child behind, and their afraid to be scrutinized,
they’re also afraid of their students missing the seemingly easy questions on
the test. So the focus shifts from daily lessons and growth to making sure the
students are able to make their test score reflect the fact that information is
going forth in their classrooms and that they can regurgitate information.
Teachers have ultimately lost the courage to teach.
In
1998 Parker J. Palmer wrote a book called: The Courage to Teach. In this book
he describes the components that enable a teacher to perform their job both
inside and outside of school. In his book I stumbled across this quote:
“If we withdrew
our assent from these structures, they would collapse, an academic version of
the Velvet Revolution. But we collaborate because they so successfully exploit
our fear. Fear is what distances us from our colleagues, out students, our
subjects, ourselves. Fear shuts down those ‘experiments with truth’ that allow
us to weave a wide web of connections—and thus shuts down our capacity to teach
as well.”
I couldn’t agree more, and this is
the very thing I would like to address. Teachers need the confidence that we
are support and considered valuable contributors to the decisions we have to
apply. This is where you come in. I feel that you support and value us as a
staff community, but there are some general patterns and district policies that
need to be changed.
As
a fearful teacher, one wouldn’t take risks in order for students to gain more.
For example, if the science standards don’t require students to dive into the
depths of a topic like electricity, then that teacher won’t touch it. The
underlying thought is that the students will get that later, and I should focus
on the documented material that I’m responsible for. I was talking with a
colleague, and she recounted an experience she had with her principal. She was
teaching and she ended up elaborating on a subject that had nothing to do with
the posted objective for that assignment. As she explained the students were
engaged, interested and asking questions. The principal can in and sat in the
back of the classroom. She figured since the students were involved the
information was appropriate and relevant that she would be fine. To make a long
story short, she ended up being “written up” for not having that particular
objective posted. This was a very traumatizing event for her. Since this
incident she teaches to the book. Her objectives are always posted and she
won’t veer away. If the students get slightly off topic during the lesson she
redirects them robotically. You would have to see her in action to know what
I’m saying, but this is a problem. This principal was attempting to hold the
teacher accountable for her time and the information she presents, but what she
ultimately did was stifle the teacher’s creativity and her ability to include
the students in the ability to inquire of more. I doubt the principal had
anything but good intentions, but good intentions sometimes can cause negative
outcomes.
Being
a principal, your area of influence outreaches mine as far as I can see. I can
collaborate with some teachers and come up with a presentation for you
concerning our school and I’m more than confident that if our proposed solution
is feasible that you’ll do what you can to make it happen. Here is my request.
I’ve designed a survey that I will distribute to the teachers within our school
to determine if they feel “hampered” by the pressures of frequent standardized
tests, if I have your consent. I will then consider the result and present you
with a graph containing that information. Once we gather that information, I
would like for you to forward my survey to your fellow principals and request
that they distribute them amongst their staffs. After the surveys are completed
I will then consider the results and make an additional graph that reflects the
information. Armed with the information gathered I can then bring it back to
you and we can devise a plan that will address the problem right here on or
campus. When our campus environment improves due to the changes we make, we can
then bring the topic up to the district with proof that it is an issue and
present an effective solution that has already been applied and successful
giving our proposal more solidity.
Teachers
should be free to teach the standards throughout the school year with ease. We
should be able to determine our pace, variety and quantity. Curriculum details
should not be arrested by particular district assigned resources, but rather
teacher chosen vehicles to get the job done. We should also be given additional
planning time that cannot be taken up by meetings, parent conferences, and
student disciplinary issues. In addition to these things we should also have
support in the areas of our weaknesses. I know that professional development
opportunities are available, but we need some hands on feedback. We need
facilitators to come in and demonstrate the information that they present in
order for it to be more effective, then we can relay that information to our
fellow staff members in an arranged meeting.
I’m
bringing these ideas to you because I know you can make a difference. You know
me, you know my work, and you know my passion. I’m not just another teacher to
you; I’m a valuable asset to your staff (as you have told me). I know that
implementing these changes will make our school stand out among the rest and
this could possible distinguish you amongst your fellow principals. While the
problem is obvious, and the factors vary, no one has come up with a plan to
directly combat the problem head on. Please help me in helping our district
make some necessary changes that can restore our teacher’s confidence thus
improving our student progress. Thank you for your time and I look forward to
hearing from you soon.
Yours truly,
Jocelyn Elmore
Dear Jocelyn,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your work in this course, and in this letter in particular.
Your work here is arresting in its simplicity, straightforwardness and honestly. The single quote from Palmer, and the single anecdote you share from your colleague--together, they us really everything we need to know about what is going wrong today!
This is powerful and beautiful writing. My only suggestion is that I don't know that a survey on its own would do the trick of persuading people of the terrible consequences of making teachers and students dwell in fear (rather than hope and love). The survey is a wonderful idea, but we probably also need more examples of the sorts you provide here--of how good people are doing things that unintentionally hurt teachers and kids.
A story like that, backed by survey data of wider trends, is a great place to start.
Thank you for this piece--it is wonderful. Good luck this year. Stay in touch!
Kyle